forest_ofthe_nightingale

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Well I happen to live in a small town... we're not like this! ... Okay, maybe a little... all right! We are! I know you already know this, but I'll ...

Mom: 85,700,000 results Dad: 56,800,000 results Sorry Dad, guess Mom beat you... again.

10/10 because that movie is absolutely awesome... and I didn't have enough room on mine either. :D

I've already told you this, but I'll remind you: it's the second line of each stanza that is the problem. In all your first lines, you have a color description. ...

I agree that that's either too many colors close together or too few. I suggest either changing the order of your stanza so there's no two color descriptions next to ...

Well titled. You really got under this person's skin and showed us her wants the way she would. Good job. There is one stanza, though, that doesn't quite fit and ...

Considering all the restrictions (must rhyme, must have refrain, etc.) it's not all that bad. The only reason I gag is because it reminds me of the teacher that assigned ...

You liked it!?! I hate it. I wanted critique... see that little message at the bottom... oh wait. You never read it, so how would you know what I wrote ...

*evil grin*

I must say I agree with you on the title, Chevy. Not my favorite, but I have no idea what would be a good title. I'm open to ideas. Also: ...

Had anyone else been there, they would have been inclined to agree.

Hey- the poetry was good, but I liked the format best. You win. (and thanks to Dusky for pointing out that we can see it all pretty). Yup, its all ...

First off, fix your grammar and spelling. But that's already been said, so I'll leave that and continue. You don't get a very strong beginning when you end your first ...

It is not a normal pain that you feel when you lose her. It is not natural, not feigned. It cuts deep, boring into your soul and aching to pull ...