forest_ofthe_nightingale

When the World Spins Out of Control When the world spins out of control, It's usually best to consult a troll. For he tends to give the best advice Unless ...

this wasn't deleteable... :(

SPELLING! stil should be "still" an should be "am" higer should be "higher" Feirce should be "fierce" Spell check, won't you? :D Either I'm really tired or there was no ...

Changed... sorry about the grammar error. Any better?

Much like yoha_ahoy's required english ballad. The rules: must have a set rhyme scheme (refrain does not have to follow the scheme), a refrain,at least 6 stanzas, a plot, a ...

Hi!!! You just joined yesterday and all these people welcomed you already. *jealous*. I wish I were that popular... Oh well. Hi!!! :D

^^ wishing is so hard to do Please don't crit I'm in Hell . Please!!! :D

The ending was a bit... surprising? It was too abrupt, as Muse said. You may like it like that, but in my opinion, you need some form of prior foreshadowing. ...

Natyr Lucio: Don't look to another poet for that effect. What? Sorry, I understand everything ... and agree with a majority of it... but this. I wrote it. :D

Well, I still stand in that LOTR lovers can find it quite diffucult to crit this. And I agree in that sonnets are insane to write. If I even tried ...

I changed it some... I think this sounds better, but it's hard to love your own writing. Any opinions?

Awesome battle that one. I loved your rhyme scheme as well... and that you remained consistent with it. That's hard to do and not sound forced, but you got it. ...

"And make sure it's super-fine white! None of this whole-wheat crap! I won't be patient! Go, fool!" The gryphon raged. John frowned, rooted to the ground. "No." He hissed back.

She takes credit for recruiting the genius! *sigh* It's true. Hehe band geek! I love ya, but I'm glad I'm no longer a part of it! Um... welcome? I can't ...

That's kind of funny that you thought that the last line was forced (it's good to know that it sounded like that), but that actually was the easiest stanza to ...