forest_ofthe_nightingale

^^^ wrote forest of darkness and hypnotizes me with her avatar.

Hi millie!!! *waves*

^^^Has an awesome avatar and a creepy username.

When the world keeps spinning out of control, You must know that you can request no troll Because he has just thrown you about, Maybe even stuffed you right full ...

I actually think that, unless you enter a profession (such as screen acting, modeling, etc.) in which looks are basically everything, good looks are a hinderance. I mean, when a ...

10/10 I love it.... whoosh!!! fire.

This was a good poem... I don't even like orange juice, so that's saying something. :D

I apologize in advance as I am not going to be as kind. :D OK, first off, if the maiden's hand was stolen by the king of Haden, why would ...

DarkerSarah's Johnny Depp avatar wins... no competition there. Umm... no other nominations.

The only problem I had with this poem was that you explained it at the end. Don't bother. It's beautiful and I think you should let readers think what they ...

Mirrors are wonderful things to write about. 100/100 on subject!!! Yay!!! Just a couple of grammatical things: instead of a comma at the end of the first line, it should ...

"a part" should be "apart". And take Firestarter's advice. His punctuation and grammar makes your poem flow better and pause in the correct places. It's a nice idea and I ...

You start quoting from the movie as part of regular conversation. (like all the time!!!) You like to tell your mom that you are hungry by quoting: "Merry, I'm hungry." ...

I have yet to finish it... look out for PART TWO!!!! I do need to work on the rhythm though... ah well. I'll change it soon enough.

I'm in on a secret.... yoha will reveal all soon enough.... I LOVE IT, but i cannot tell why currently. Sorry!