forest_ofthe_nightingale

Twisted, vile words, snaking through the air, winding up my throat as the noose i wish you would place there. You curse and haunt me, killing my spirit with your ...

This is a really awesome poem, but I don't like how you doubled phrases twice in a row: Let me forget let me forget Or let me go let me ...

Ok, this is a really awesome poem, but there's just one thing that kinda bugged me. before I found you sprawled in a romantic heap on the sand (but still ...