forest_ofthe_nightingale

I don't really feel any emotion in reading this poem. It almost seems like you (correct me if I'm wrong) had an idea, but couldn't put it into words that ...

... whoa. Awesome. It sounds like a song ( don't kill me for this)... i kept hearing a rapper read it as I did.

This has a good idea. I like the way you portrayed this witch, not as all evil, but as a person who has been scorned by the world. However, some ...

The eyes, the eyes of them all, they were watching me, gazing at me with venom in their minds. The eyes of the athletes were the first to stare at ...

1:07. I am still waiting, sitting on my bed. I have pulled my knees up to my chest and I am hugging them, trying not to cry. Has he forgotten ...

My eyes are bulging, begging me for air, but I can't move. I am staring at the child, the little one that had seemingly escaped our fall. His arm is ...

This was a lovely poem. I especially like this part: The intoxicated creatures of idyll world, Open up and tend to light. Amazing job.

I liked how you really poured yourself- and your feelings- into this poem. I liked the emotion, but there are a few things you can fix. And my pen and ...

Joseph Becker marched silently alongside his comrades, sheltered by the darkness of the tree canopy. His thoughts were strung together, a tangled web the wind had knotted so well. The ...

Characters Rosalind - Only normal (if you can call her that) person in the play Orlando - Guy with no charismatic ability who is in love with Rosalind Celia - ...

This is uber- long, but it's hillarious. Legolas was great (you are so mean to him :D ) and I loved the "rapper servant stuck in the wrong age". Great ...

thanks for sparing me, Liz! lol. Any criticism is welcome.

Yeah sorry about the rushed end and all- im going to edit it as soon as i can- the "old ugly book" is a joke, by the way. :D

Whoa, I'm just curious here- are you guys (soccerfreak and Once Upon A dream) having the same thoughts? Sorry- I just had to ask. :D Anyway, to explain the third ...

Do You See? When you look into the mirror, on your special day, won’t you please tell me, what can you see? Do you see what the world sees? The ...