forest_ofthe_nightingale

This is really gorgeous... it brought back some memories. Thank you!!! You made me happy to read it!!!

I think I'm going to be gone for a while, mostly due to school and soccer season!!! Yay for me!!! But as soon as I am reinspired, I shall return, ...

Dude, I'm doing Model UN too... but I'm sorry to say that I don't know what to do exactly either. Well, I guess good luck is always good! I hope ...

There was a lot of emotion in this poem and I felt as though I were hearing the rant of a child at their mother. Good rhyming, not forced. But ...

I like the last word a lot. I'm just going to tell you that first. She knows I long for her, Despite the staring she causes, Despite the sickness she ...

7/10 because I'm not a cat person... *shivers*. Yeah... sorry. But its still cool because swimming's awesome.

But no one gave it to me!!! Dang it! I really wanted that hippo. TPBM loves lemonade but hates sugary maple syrup.

I'm probably not supposed to double-post, but hey... um... get over it? Oh well. I still love ya and yeah... hi again.

7/10 because there aren't any caps, but it's still cool... I won't try it.

10/10 because I love family guy and the second one's hilarious. Those bloody Brits!

Actually, I'm a girl... not a man... oh well. You get the point. Bambi's my hero! He is the role model for all people who can't manage to stay on ...

Thank you so much for critiquing this!!! I'll work on the beginning, which is going to be the opening "introductory" scene for this (if we ever get around to performing ...

Yeah, no in-depth stuff here... but I know how easy it is to do that... I've done the same thing to other people like 5 million times.

Ummm.... you missed the point... its supposed to be funny. Every line, I use a rhyming dictionary and I have to use the first word I see in that sentence... ...

7/10 Pretty but reminds me of Beauty and the Beast *shivers*