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Yay!!! The first chapter is up!!!! :D It was very well-written, I like what happened. But the pace could be slowed down, it went at a breakneck speed. Otherwise, very ...

I started when I was 4...I wouldn't even play with toys, it was always BOOKS. :lol:

has a certain beauty to it. Jade owns.

Personally, I wish she'd made it more obvious in the actual books. That'd have made Dumbledore's fight with (and subsequent killing of) Grindelwald so much more emotional and meaningful. As ...

Deathly Hallows rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!! Except for the [s]crappilogue[/s] epilogue. And the pairings, I hate Harry/Ginny. The Prince's Tale was such a sad chapter... :cry: poor Snape. I still like James/Li

5/10...boring. (I bet mine is, too.)

I read that on Yahoo!News. Suddenly, I feel disappointed, and JK Rowling isn't my favorite author anymore. I'll never look at our beloved Dumbledore the same way again... :cry:

10/10...nice.

Elayna carried on struggling nonetheless and tried to prise my hands apart. She almost succeeded but I held firmly and eventually she gave up and lay limp in my arms, ...

There we go! I took this picture today, hope all of you like Arwen! (If it turns out to be a boy, Arwin).

Hi, This piece was just...beautiful. I loved the original descriptions, and the way it flowed so smoothly. Is this a prologue, or just a stand-alone piece? Excellent! :D

Hi, Sorry, no critique. I was confused about Tanslie as well, maybe you could make her gender a bit more clear to the reader in the story? It was very ...

This is the introduction to Faith, a novella I wrote in sixth grade. I'm in the sixth grade. :| In my unneeded opinion, you pulled "telling" off quite nicely! Moon ...

Hi, This was a very good chapter. I couldn't find anything wrong, and it really intrigued me. Your style was so clear, and the names...I like your names. And Elayna's ...

Hi, I agree with what everyone else said. You need to "show" rather than "tell". Telling somehow makes the story go really fast. Slow done the pace with some description, ...