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happy-go-lucky: Thanks for pointing out the nitpicks, I'm glad you like the story. :) Reuben A: Haha, yeah I know where SA is. I'm from East Africa. :D You wouldn't ...

Prologue A Small Victory Zakulas glared into the basin of swirling white mist. “SIRK!” A figure clothed and hooded in navy blue stepped out of the shadows. “Yes, Master?” “What ...

Hi, Thanks for posting this!! It really helped me.

Thanks, guys! I really appreciate the critique. :)

Have any of you read The Eye of the World by Robert Jordan? What do you think of it? I'm reading it now, and it's really good so far! :D

I wouldn't advise it...maybe, something a lot like it. You can go about your day, (AS YOURSELF) but when you do some stuff, imagine what your character would do. Like, ...

Just Wacky by Andy Griffith. It was weird, dorky, insane, nonsensical... :o I was going NUTS while reading it...sheesh. :?

Ew, I hate writing by hand. I write on my computer, which is in the living room. Nice for getting used to working in a noisy environment. :lol:

The Hidden School and Cia and Myere are on hold now. I started another fantasy novel, and it's going GOOD!!! :lol: It's called 'Icy Paths' and I posted the prologue ...

Hi, "Alexandru's father is going to have you killed. Don't ask me how I know...just trust me. Do you trust me, Corina?" Daniel asked, standing up. That's all very well, ...

Hi Wow, that was very well-written. Your choice in words, the was all so eloquent. The dialogue was also well-done, as it was so realistic. He was already in human ...

Hey, I liked this very much. It was very interesting because the...action, I guess...kept the reader interested. The only thing that stuck out (at me) was: “Sunny! Sunny!” he whispered ...

Hi, The plot so far sounds interesting, good work on that! :smt023 But the grammatical stuff, as you've been told, needs work. Can't wait to read more! :)

Hi, This was really good! :) I like the fairy. :lol: It was very well-written, and I didn't find any mistakes.

I read it, it was so, so touching!! :D I think I'm most like Jo, with bits of Amy. :) Have you read Good Wives ?