flytodreams

I've only read the first book. :oops: As most people round here think, I don't think it deserved even a quarter of the popularity it got. I don't hate it, ...

Hi, WOW! This was really good, better than the prologue. :) I adored the way you wrote all the action, although I agree with RubinLikes2Write. You could add some more ...

Hi, I really liked this piece. It flowed wonderfully, and the vocabulary level was great. I didn't notice anything wrong. Only the prologue doesn't seem to hint at anything much ...

Hello! It's Q from Facebook. 8) I really enjoyed this, the style was beautiful and artsy. The sentences flowed really well. All the best with the contest! :smt038

Hello! I really enjoyed this. Your writing style is so fresh, modern and interesting, I adore it. The description of the princesses could be shortened to keep the reader reading, ...

Hi, I suck at critiquing, but I'll try my best. ^_^ This piece was really far too short. It was empty of description or characterization or any sort of detail. ...

I'm here! 8) Well, I was getting confused with the flashbacks and then the maybe you might want to smooth that out. That was the only thing I noticed that ...

Hi, Thanks for the advice, I'll take it into account. :) Although there isn't really a Chapter One for this yet, the other chapters are earlier drafts.

Hi beckiw! I'm so flattered I was your first review, lol. :) But the plot and everything of this story is totally different now. Do you mind checking out the ...

I have two. Perfect by Simple Plan, or A Little Too Not Over You - David Archuleta.

Lucky, Everytime.

Hi, This is a very well-written piece! :) I enjoyed it. But I caught one mistake. Once upon a time, in an ordinary… In fact, scrap that, I am Logan ...

I think you kind of switched POVs in the beginning. Since he worked in the kitchens, there was always the faint smell of flour lingering around him. He found little ...

Thanks for posting this! :D Show, don't tell is one rule I need to work on, heheh.

1. Write because it makes you feel good. 2. Write whatever you feel like writing. 3. WRITE!