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The teacher opened her book and began writing sums on the board, while the students bent their heads over their books and began doing them.

Yes...if I knew the victim. Otherwise I'd just run. - Cia. Can you dance five minutes without stopping?

Dragons, they're so cool! :D

Dragons! Both because I love dragons, and because I think they'd look cooler. :D

Go out. I like books, but I'm not a bookworm - Cia. What do you think of jewelry?

Thanks for the critique.

Type on the computer. Always. And I can do my story while being on yws/wtj/etc.

Done, can you critique it now? I don't mind if you're 100% harsh.

Please be brutally honest on anything, description, dialogue, setting, style...anything! I just want to improve my writing! _____ Chapter 1 Vranem West “Cia! Cia!” said a voice. Cia yawned and ...

I agree with eleinasari, but otherwise the story was excellent! :D

I've read all six books of HP, but only one book of LOTR, so saying HP would be unfair, lol. I agree with the others about HP being easier to ...

I think Harry won't, just Voldemort and a bunch of other people.

The boy looked about two years older than herself, but had a knack of relieving people from their smaller possessions. Should it be 'from' or 'of'? She was about eight, ...

The first chapter of 'Cia and Myere' is done, now I'm writing the second chapter. And as for The Hidden School, I deleted the 2nd and 3rd chapter, and now ...

The second one will be, once I actually finish the first chapter, and edit it.