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Mayve I could change the opening to like explain their lives or something, maybe use it as a prologue? Yeah, that would be good. But don't make it too boring, ...

You get rich, but all your money gets stolen. I wish I had another cat.

Hi, Crucifix! I saw you around the Fantasy Fiction board, I'm assuming you write fantay? Heck, I don't know about the TW-YWS war, so, I don't hate you. :D Hope ...

"Please spare my mother" a little girl pleaded. "Please spare my mother , " a little girl pleaded. The monsters cackled evily around her. evilly, I think. The evil creatures ...

It was usual for every house to have at least one brightly coloured bird, it was a sort of tradition of the tree people, the brighter the bird, the better ...

Hi, polly! I really want to learn to play the piano, but I don't know how to start!!! And I like singing too, :D Welcome to YWS, and hope to ...

10/10...luvvin it!

All the others who critiqued this story got everything, so I'll just say: This is a great story! Rohsair's voice is realistic, and the pace, style and description are ace!! ...

Make the Romeo say something along the lines of: "I would walk on fire for you!"/"I would walk to the ends of the world for your love." You know, make ...

Thanks for the help! I prefer the third one too, but I was just making sure.

The moon, because I want to see what the translation of my name looks like.

Pretty good, but I wish it had color. :D

My favorite is the third one. It's fantastic! But is it just me, or are they a little too big?

It's so CUTE!!!! The colors are really good. :D

Such a beautiful picture! I really like it uncropped. :D