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8/10. Funy, but I don't like dogs.

Aveyond never heard of it. anyway. Great plot, great story wow. Rhen swung her arm out of Lila grip and marched up to Lars. "Not a go Lars sighed and ...

10/10 because I love Corpse Bride, and that's a good question.

Icy Paths is my new obsession!!!!!!! The prologue and first chapter are already up. By the way, you've read and reviewed them, thanks a lot! If you haven't, please check ...

I think it's okay for a short piece of characters talking. But if it's a long conversation, it would be much too confusing. I think if a writer uses tags ...

TV and movies don't really inspire me. Unless they're fantasy movies like Dragonheart or Lord of the Rings. Those really give me ideas. :D Yay for LOTR movies!!!!

I really don't like writing by pen. In fact, I hate it. I always, always type my stories on the computer. Except when I get a really awesome idea when ...

No pattern really. Sometimes I write so many pages. Most of the time I write one sentence. ( :cry:) Other times, I write a few words. ( :P ) I ...

Hey. It was a brilliant start, but there were some mistakes. Everyone who critiqued this already pointed them out though. But something was amiss... Khor felt like he had too ...

Hi, this was pretty good plot-wise. I'm really interested to see what happens to the clock. The rest of the chapters will have something to do with the clock, right? ...

Yep. Space between the paragraphs. It makes everything much easier to read. Describe some more. This was so rushed. Some more description would improve it so much more. Good work ...

Jesse has been practicing all summer to be the fastest runner in the fifth-grade at his school. But he is beat to that title by a strange new girl, Leslie. ...

After myself on the upper half of my body, I wrapped the towel around my waist and proceeded to the sink at the opposite side of the room. It was ...

Either buy a puppy, or pay for a doctor to cure my utterly random friend. ~ Rhen. Do you believe in the phrase 'wish upon a star'?

I'm back, now for the rest of the critiquing: Her vision had cleared not only like the red she had see before. Her vision had cleared; there was no more ...