flytodreams

Same way I choose my character names; take an ordinary word or name, and play around with it. (Bear turned into Byeran, for example).

Hi, fieryglaciers! Welcome to Young Writers Society, I'm Flytodreams.

Hi, P.G! :smt006 I'm flytodreams. Welcome to YWS!!! It's a really awesome site, and you'll have a great time here! Hope to see you around..

Hi, josianne! Can I call you Josi? Welcome to YWS! Hope to see your work around.

Very good! The whole story, the wording...everything kept me totally interested. You did a great job on the first and the last paragraph. Keep writing! :D

Wow, so good! Everyone above pointed out exactly why it was, so I won't repeat. My favorite part was this: We turned a corner and the sea appeared in front ...

But their creations weren’t Full-stop after 'weren't'. I'd suggest breaking this up into paragraphs, it makes it easier to read. I also think the villain's reaction was a bit overdone. ...

I've heard a few songs by Evanescence, just a handful, and I'm impressed! Amy Lee has an amazing voice, and the lyrics are just so..I don't know what the word ...

Okay, but he or she isn't that pretty yet, LOL.

Hi, I just thought you'd all like to know that my cat, Twinkle....had a baby yesterday!!!! The first time she gave birth, she wasn't lucky, :cry: . But yesterday evening, ...

I agree with kitty15, it was info-dumping, and much too short. But I like the sound of the creatures, especially the ice mermaids. I'd like to see more of them. ...

hmm...i usually try to incorporate a description of my character in dialogue and stuff. i try not to describe a character right of the bat, but kind of make it ...

Hi, Someguy! Welcome to YWS, hope you have fun around! :) I love your avatar. :lol:

Just a little description? So I can build up a picture of an older version of her? :)

I don't watch many TV shows. Friends, One Tree Hill, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Angel, 8 Simple Rules for Dating my Teenage Daughter. (that's the name, right?)