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Hellow! I agree with xKelle_Bellex. The song's packed to the brim with bitter emotion. It's very amusing, like a parody. But as a serious song, not so much. What did ...

Now I'm sad. :( TYWC was the first writing website I ever went to..I don't even remember how old I was. Eight, maybe. I was Sabrina1234/The Red Kitten. And now ...

Hola back Sixteen Candles! :) Welcome to YWS! I love Ghost Whisperer and Supernatural too! Aren't they just the best? Oh, and I like Harry Potter too. XD You'll have ...

Hey there! The plot looks great, and I think it could be pulled off, if you just edit this piece. The first paragraph was really long, and it was littered ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! :) Well, this was too terribly short, there's practically nothing to review. But. I like it. :D Just imagine. Think. This sounds awkward. Choose one ...

Hey, In my opinion, the main character *did* come off as melodramatic, and there was no trace of cynicism. Your writing style was fantastic though, and something about a Dreamwalker ...

Hey there! The idea of this story sounds really interesting, but such stories aren't enjoyable to read unless you really get the reader emotionally involved. In my limited experience. :) ...

Tis very short, so it won't be a hassle. :lol: I'd like some advice on the characterization, please. :) I'll review all your pieces too! Hehe. *hands over a plate ...

Hi, Ooh, mysterious. You've really intrigued me! I'll definitely keep writing. The prologue rocked, and I'm started to be really attached to Freeda. :lol: The characterization is wonderful. Keep writi

Heya, This piece is very cool. :lol: Freeda's character is freaky. I like it! :) Keep writing!

Hey, Oh my gosh, your writing style intimidates me. This can't have been written Word-warring! :? It's really good, I liked your style, but I agree with someone up there ...

Hi I must confess, I'm crazy about this piece. :D It flowed very well, and the end left me starving for more. Rachel fascinated me, I thought she was a ...

Heya! There were a few grammar problems in the story, that distracted from it a bit. It also went a little too fast, and it doesn't seem like anything big ...

Thanks so much for the reviews! By having Marcus being mentioned and then referring to him as "the opponent who had already won", I was under the impression it would ...

Hiya! I'm here. :D This was a great piece, you really captured the emotion, and the characterization is AWESOME. In the second part though, you could add a little more ...