fluteluvr77

Um well the other two reviews basically did all the corrections. But, this was an excellent story which you really should continue. Develop the character of her architecture teacher and ...

Karen looked out the airplane window as they landed. Three hours in the air had led them to this . The sky was dark gray, the grass was covered by ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! I'll work on it... fluteluvr77

You're homeschooled?? Luckyy, you're like Stargirl (God, I love that book

Kai?? I love that name, so unique :P...Haha, I love pasta and pomogranetes too, too bad you can rarely buy them in the US (the pomogranetes, I mean). Ditto on ...

Wow, this was a really good poem. I had no nitpicks except that you should expand your ideas a little more. Maybe make it a little longer? Gold star for ...

That was amazing! I was just waiting for the happily-ever-after, but somehow it was made better that it never came. It was sooo sad, but in a good romantic way ...

I stare across the room, At him and only him, As if no one else existed, As if nothing else mattered. I take in his perfect features, Those emerald-green eyes, ...

Amazing poem here. The rhythm was nearly perfect which isn't something you see very often. I loved the repetition in this too. The way you compared the dance to blood ...

I think I already nitpicked this one to death, so no more bad stuff (for now :P). But, I love the title, really draws you in. And of course the ...

Chapter 2: Maple Syrup and Voltswagens "Love is the greatest revenge ~ Tremelo When I came to, the first thing I saw wre Clay's eyes, gazing at me with what ...

Alright, grammar Nazis, I edited it. Once Twin and I start writing again, we'll add the flashbacks, which will probably be right after midterms :(.

Um, might I see you again? iz wnt tooo ete choscolet

Port **hope this hasn't been used before, I didn't feel like checking ;)**

Well, it isn't really the length that matters. Does your teacher want a review or a synopsis? This is an excellent summary of the book. However, if you want to ...