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Heyy Evi, Excellent job on this...I never thought much of killing an ant, but I can totally relate to this! I'm impressed with how you connected such a small event ...

Wow Rosey this is really good...I couldn't find any nitpicks that anti-pop hadn't fixed...This story isn't what I expected when I read the prompt, but it is really good! I ...

Heyy, I didn't have many nitpicks in this, but the few that I did are in caps in the quote I hope you’ll be happier now, seeing as that’s one ...

I can't believe no one reviewed this! Must be because they were too intimidated... :P Inspecting it closer, she smiled to herself. ‘50 dollars,’ was scrawled across the middle of ...

'Kay so nitpicks! As usual :P Comments are in caps... I stared at myself in the mirror, watching my thighs, my stomach, my arms, my DELETE THE MY everything jiggle. ...

Heyy, This poem was really good and I loved the theme of everything...Like the other reviews, I have to say that the 2nd stanza needs a little work...Overall, it was ...

Heyy there! You have red hair!!! Luckyyyyyyyyy! Mine is like jet black and stands out absolutely everywhere. Hehe, it drives me crazy! I love Taylor Swift too!!! What's your favorite ...

Wow this was really good. I loved the environmental part in this and the way you made it relate to the bigger picture. Especially loved the way the roses symbolize ...

This was really good princess! I'm glad you aren't quitting writing though...Hehe, you're waaaaay too good to quit :) It's a pretty common theme, but the way you portrayed it ...

I loved this poem, it was really original and an amazing theme. Personally, I don't like too much formatting in a poem. But, it seemed to work well for you...The ...

Hey there Ballerina! Your story's pretty good...I'm going to go over the nitpicks first, concept stuff is at the bottom...All of my comments are in caps...:P Chapter 1 The Opera ...

Whoa, you're right this is really long. Haha, it was interesting though, do you really breakdance?? I wish I could but I would probably end up falling and killing myself...Hehe ...

Aww, Evi covered all the nitpicks!!! :(...Guess I'll have to go with the concept-ish stuff now... Theme - Whoa, I loved it! It came out really well...I guess, by Em's ...

'Kay twin, the idea was pretty good...Em's review pretty much covered the concept issues. So, I get the nit-picks! Yay!! :) Chapter 5 “See, there’s the big dipper, and there’s ...

I really liked this piece. I think it was a little too short. Develop the ideas a little more. Maybe outline the differences between a friend and a true friend ...