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Heyy Bri! Nice to see that you FINALLY wrote something, slow much?? 'Kay done with the best friend opinionated comments :P ...Good job on this, but I have to agree ...

Twin! This is awesome!! I love the stanza : Glass is easily broken, And permafrost never melts. I am confined to this existence, Where there is little else to see. ...

Heyy! These are two really nice pictures. With the first one, it seems like I've seen it before so many times, yet never really paid attention. It's an interesting thing ...

Heyy! This was a really good story. I loved the title of this piece, it immediately drew me in. I love how you changed the points of views, and made ...

Haha, this is a really good story! I really liked the title, it drew me in instantly. I especially loved how you wrote out the word sixteenth instead of using ...

'Kayy so nitpicks first! I could’ve lived in Buckingham Palace; if it was still with that man, I would change this to "could have"... It was like a putrid wall ...

Whoa that's a lot of different rhyme schemes...I only use the end rhymes, but I might just try out some other styles now. I always have trouble using rhymes that ...

The other reviewers basically pointed out all the mistakes...But, this was a really good piece and I think it should be continued. I can see how Bobby is similar to ...

Twin!!! You got featured again?!?!?! Unfair, but congrats!!! :D This was reallllly good!! jumelle

Yeah, twin I think you're right. We should slow down and add more details. But I like that Erin spills the beans over the phone. It seems to make more ...

This was a really good poem, and I didn't have any nitpicks that hadn't been covered by the other reviewers. It's one of my new favorites and excellent job. Gold ...

Heyy Damsel! Welcome to YWS! I love poetry too. It tends to be romantic and somewhat depressing lately, but I do have a romance/comedy collaborating novel up...God, I love Taylor ...

This is hilarious!! Great job! Automatic gold star for sheer awesomeness! =]]

Whoa NO WAY! I'm from Singapore too!! yay! **smiles and waves like a psychopath**. There aren't really any rules that the others haven't covered. So, feel free to PM me ...

Heyy Ballerina! I think Winter's Twelfth Night covered all the nitpicks, but be sure to edit those. Being the grammar Nazi that I am, I think mechanics can make or ...