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  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Re-living the dream

    This is really well-written and I couldn't find any nitpicks...But, I didn't really understand why in the beginning it says they had caught up to the MC talking about her ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: A Bird.

    Wow meep this is beautiful! The only thing I would change about this are the colors you used. For me red and blue don't contrast too well. Maybe you could ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Sparkly Adventures of Bryce {volume 1}

    Haha! I loved this!! It's absolutely adorable and the word "sparkology" made me crack up! His whole class laughed at his lack of sparkology. Bryce did not know what to ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: We're So Blind

    **stares in shock** WOW! That was a really good poem!! Amazing job on this, I haven't read anything like that in a while...**slowly calms down enough to actually review this** ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: One big, not-so-happy family.

    Wow, I am absolutely speechless...This is amazing and conveys the feelings of the writer soo well...The only two nitpicks I really had with this were the lines : Sorry, hun; ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Political Cartoon

    Haha, meep I loved took me a second to decipher the upside down handwriting, but y'know...I love the little atomic bomb signs that you just have hanging around :P...The hand ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Center

    Wow, Princess! This is really good...I didn't really have any nitpicks with this...I liked how it's short yet conveys the meaning perfectly. The one thing that I didn't really like ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Snoink & Griff

    **laughs hysterically** **tries to stop laughing** **fails miserably** This is hysterical!! They both look soooooooo adorable!! God, meep, I can't believe that you think that you can't draw! Anyway, a

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Diary of a Teenage Shopper

    Nice job on this! Small nitpick here : Yes, I come from a rather, healthy family, per say. There shouldn't be a comma between rather and healthy...and as Jay said, ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: My first attempt at photography!

    Heyy Damsel! Are you kiddin me? This is India?!?!?! Not the places I went to...I just saw the temples and the houses and the towns...These pictures are gorgeous!! The one ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: A contribution for planet Meep!

    Hahahaha, this drawing is hysterical!!! **Calms down a bit** It's interesting how you put yourself in the middle of it with the pen...Anywayz, the only real problem I have with ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Other Re: You Don't Understand

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    Feb 26, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm so special! I have the word "the" in my name!

    Haha, so Em, 'pparently I never commented on this...for some reason...This was really...uh, how would you describe it?...interesting works! =] The Pablo Delphinater?? Really Em??? You amaze me sometim

    Feb 25, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Moments

    Wow, this is a really good poem! I wish that I could write poetry this well...So, anywayz, nitpicks : Moments, Only for moments it’s just us. This is just my ...

    Feb 25, 2009
  • General Articles Re: The long way home.

    Whoa, meep! You said that you didn't write well, are you kidding me???? This is AWESOME! Haha, being a Singaporean, I can see why it would be embarrassing to have ...

    Feb 24, 2009


Work expands to fill the time available for its completion.
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