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  • Other Poetry Re: A Whisper in the Trees

    WOW! You were really descriptive and you really made people want to read it with your beginning. The way you ended the peom was very intresting to.

    Apr 29, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Sunset

    Half the sun shown on the horizon Dust and sand settled as did the sun Darkness will soon come And the light soon will go Colors are shining until moonbeams ...

    Apr 29, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Moonlit Puddle

    That was really good! It was intriguing. You should write more.

    Apr 28, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Witch

    Very good but specify what is happening to certian people and decide if you're going to use names or not.

    Apr 28, 2007


That's just what translation is, I think. That's all speaking is. Listening to the other and trying to see past your own biases to glimpse what they're trying to say. Showing yourself to the world, and hoping someone else understands.
— Ramy (Babel by R. F. Kuang)