flowerchild

Thanks for the imput. I wasn't sure how to define the genre and you're right it is more fantasy. THis is my rough draft and since i first wrote it ...

Prologue She was an orphan. She worked as the servant of the Lord of Lancaster. He owned a small castle that over shadowed the small town of huts. She had ...

I am a big fan of this series and my friend is amzing at writing fanfictions about it. To sum up I am slightly obsessed. Also I want to make ...

That is funny. You might want to edit it so that you can really tell who it is passing the note for people who haven't read Harry Potter. Otherwise it ...

The trees blow and sway As I sit, silent, on the quay. I look down at the shimmering blue; And see myself and you. For you are that immense stretch ...

THat is so true. Its clever to write something like that and defy that stupid monster. It happens to every body. Keep Writing! Your poem ryhmed nicely and it had ...

That is a cool outlook on a storm. It describes it really well. I think that you should expand it. Your revised version is exactly what I'm talking about!!!!

Right on the back of my neck, Completely sopping wet. Soaked with spit and germs. I make a face and turn, To see him laughing, and holding a straw. I ...

OMG! That is the best poem ever! (so you don't think I'm crazy, I'm sarcastic a lot)

This is only the chorus and I haven't come up with anything yet but maybe I will. Also this is only the third set of lyrics I've come up with ...

Chorus: When your broken into so many pieces. When your broken and everythings not right. When your broken and everything is fallin' but the sky. That's when you look inside, ...

So you like burnt toast. It's not everyone's favorite thing especialy not my brothers, but I like it. You should try a burnt bagel. Your poem was hilorius! I read ...

That is an amazing set of poems. I like how you tied th e gods to that was really cool :shock: I am in shock. It is mind blasting.

There is a series of books called the Underland Chronicles so you might want to change your title. But otherwise awesome!

My dad is very special to me and this is for him.