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If there was a divine force that could stop the monotonous cracking of my knuckles to the tick of a metronome that has been set up counting the seconds to ...

You have just taken a cliche and overused idea and made it your own. Applaud yourself. Who would ever think to use smell to portray an idea? Touch and sight ...

Canned in the fragrance's prevalence, I cried out in hysteria, only to recieve a delicious mouthful of the scent that made my shaking body tense. Aren't you scared I'll leave? ...

I don't think we're all meant for greatness. I know that I am not, certainly. I twist my body and mind to find a route out-120 pounds search for the ...

You deserve a better critique than I am able to give you, but I will do my best to explain what I thought about this poem. I enjoyed how you ...

I like what you're trying to say, I just have trouble with a few inconsistencies. Poetry itself certainly does not have to rhyme or follow a distinct rhythmic (or other) ...

What type of music is this set to? And how fast are your stanzas sung? Like June said, it's difficult to critique without proper information, but I will try my ...

Though I despise giving pointless reviews, seeing as others have conveyed more helpful advice than I could ever give, I must say I am in love with your title. It ...

If time could stretch its deep voice over life's repitition and caress my starving ears, it would have nothing to say. I am not helpless nor blind nor ignorant of ...

hopefully this is easier to read

Maybe it’s because we’re different. All that I aspire to be reflects directly through your face, but you can’t see. My reasoning for this is simply that I hold the ...

Thank you! I'll work on trying to clear up a few things. I really appreciate the response (:

The half of my sanity that traced itself around the cold pavement froze as soon as it had appeared. I was lost without a sound or care. I did not ...

Okay, just letting you know, I will never be able to top the critique by Demeter, but I can let you know what I thought (: The emotion is certainly ...

Wow, i really enjoyed your imagery and use of diction. Rejection is definitely something that everyone has (or will) experience at one time or another and having just been rejected, ...