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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: [NEED HELP] Macbeth Witches Description

    For an english assessment I have to write a description of the witches and the heath from Macbeth. I have only written about the heath so far and could do ...

    May 12, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Forgot to make dinner.

    The tinkling of red wine being poured slowly into the glass, the background music to her loud conversation. The order being given, she's pretending to choose carefully – pretending to ...

    Apr 13, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The death of innocence.

    Love the poem, it was great :D

    Apr 13, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Hedgehog

    The Hedgehog Not sure where it’s going, neither sure where it’s been Innocence surrounds it, like a young child unaware but ‘so sweet’ It quietly plods around, in places hidden ...

    Apr 12, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Numb

    As both the people above me, I agree about the rhymes, but I still think it was a great poem :) Urm, just one thing confused me : I close ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello there ;)

    Hi everyone :) Urm, I'm not really into a particular style of music Elinor, but I do like artists such as Bon Iver and Imogen Heap :) And I've posted ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: sully: camera obscura (01) - (UR)

    I really enjoyed the story, the main character was interesting and funny to read, as were the other characters :) I'm interested to see where you will take this! :D

    Apr 11, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Clements, Lemon and Crunch - Part One - First Draft

    I really do love this, it's very well written! :) You've obviously thought a lot about the descriptions you used, and it paid off because it was very effective. I'm ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello there ;)

    Helloo (: I guess I'm what you would call a newbie D: Haha xD I guess I should say abit about me. My name is Fizza, which is pronounced Fizz-er. ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Look, a newbie! Wait..that's me.

    Hey Esther, I can't say much about the site or help you really, seeing as I only just joined, but I guess I can say hey xD Like everyone else ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: New feller.

    Hi Rekats, I'm Fizza :D I'm new as well, my sister recommended this site to me, and it looks really good! So you're into nature? I agree with Hannah, Watership ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Message in the Stars Part 1

    This was really great, the first paragraph had me hooked, I loved how you described things. The characters seem really great, and I interested to see where this goes! The ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: *waves* Hello, all!

    Hey Mochi! :D I only just signed up to, I guess I should make something like this too? xD Anyway, I'm the same age as you, I don't think it ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Tea Party (revised)

    Agreed with all of them, still a great poem though :)

    Apr 10, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Not Too Bright...

    Hey Earthfire :D Mmm, I see where you're coming from. I wasn't really sure of that description either, I might change it :) Thanks!

    Apr 10, 2010


Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn.
— Thomas Gray