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Ah, you ruined my plans! :( Just kidding. Great piece of advice, especially the singing one. I do that. Everyone I know does that. Good job. :) FV

I know the prologue is a bit confusing. All will be explained in good time. Just think of it as a sort of dream thing. Not very specific. Chapter One: ...

Hmm. Well, really deep and dark, I like it :) Interesting concept. The flow was good at the beginning, but got a little choppy in some places, like my sticky ...

Jimmy ran. There wasn't a whole lot of options as to where he could run. He could either dash out the door in an amazing act of stupidity and die ...

Hey people, I'm new here. I am actually in the process of writing several books right now, and the first one is on it's way to getting published! Um, you ...