firepen

Thanks! I am English so for me, palm does rhyme with harm but maybe I will think about changing it because it would be better if it worked with all ...

Thanks. I am definitely enjoying YWS! I will definitely edit some of the rhymes, your suggestions were very helpful. Firepen x

I love the idea of Lachanophopia although I think this might put off younger readers...! Thanks for the suggestions though! Also, this was really helpful, thank you very much!

Thank you very much! I think I will change the title because a few people have mentioned it and I didn't really give it a second thought!

Thanks! This was really helpful! I'm terrible at grammar so any nitpicking is greatfully recieved! I will edit it soon.

Thank you very much! I'm REALLY glad you liked th poem!

Thank you very much! I need to get editing! Your advice is really helpful though!