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The pig lets out noxious fumes that terrify mankind and suffocate bananas! Poop goes the weasel! Your butt burns all week! END! Never! Don't forget flying squirrel monkeys and blueberry ...

Actually, yes. Mainly because of keyboard/mouse overuse. The user below me loves dogs.

This was actually a school assignment--we had to write our own Screwtape Letter. For those who don't know, it's based on a book written by C.S. Lewis--it's a collection of ...

The chorus has a different ending line each time--that's why I typed it out (instead of just putting -chorus-). The wording on the ending lines needs work. Rhythm's off. Anyway, ...

Um......dreg? I like you. I don't like this. At all. What prompted this?

...........I don't care about the title. XP (it's fine.) This is good as-is. I know from experience that if you try to draw it out, the rest may not be ...

Still trying to wrap my head around all of it. What was the purpose of the smaller letters ? It seemed random to me. .........that's really all I can think ...

Disagree with Jojo on the angel/riot line. I like it. Funny thing is, I was just reading a series (manga) about a compulsive liar. (I seem to have a knack ...

Um......zombies are undead. So saying "you're not dead, but you're a zombie......." *sigh* nevermind. Granted, but now the nasty sparkly fairy vampires all hate you, and want to eat you ...

Allow a pureblood to bite you. What characters are we supposed to be roleplaying? Random ones we've made up?

I have never heard of this song before. How did it gain such notoriety? Because it is awful.

Not sure if this goes anywhere, really--someone let me know if I should move it. Anyway, there's this chart about the stages of relationships--how people go from meeting, to bonding, ...

Oh fer cryin'......

Every single one of them. (Eragon deserves a shining mention (and I don't mean shining in a good way.)) The only exceptions are Disney movies and Bridge to Terabithia.

This one: and this one: No hurry, I just want as much feedback as possible on the first struggling to improve the second. I know they need work. Do your ...