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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Angel in My Pocket

    I'm hiding in the closet with an angel in my pocket; I shut the door and locked it. Just a feeling, but I can't stop it. Take out the but. ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: I wanted a real father

    I would change the line spacing: You were not a bad man. You did not hit me or leave me or steal. You stayed at home and did your dues ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Innocent

    D'aww. (You would like the hair strand, bubbly.) I was doubtful at first, but you're right--yours is cuter, and the squashed head makes it that way!! The small hands still ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Rebecca Black's Friday

    She's actually an ok singer. They ruined her with autotune and crappy lyrics. I mean, seriously--I don't care WHO sings it, this song is pretty darn dumb. And Ke$ha is ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Other Re: Tormented Thoughts in n Insane Girl's Brain

    Yeah....you might wanna tell people you're quoting random song lyrics. :P I don't understand the first line either.....it's certainly random enough to be a girl's brain though. Other than that..... ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]

    XP I AM GOING TO GET YOU FOR THAT. Granted, but it's rancid, so I throw it away--hitting you, in your favorite shirt, in the process. I wish I had ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Many good writers seem to get ignored

    dregy. You know Nate is the founder of the site, right? That it wouldn't exist without him? There are flaws in the system. We are trying to fix them. Just.... ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]

    I did click the link. I know others find it hilarious, but I don't like panda. Sorry. I was really only commenting on the words......and actually the rating would go ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]

    Granted, but you accidentally say "No, I don't want it" to something else when you get the cheese, causing Angry Panda to wreck all your stuff. I wish I lived ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]

    Shadows cannot exist without the light. But without the shadows, the light has no meaning. Here, There Be Dragons James A Owen Panda Hrm. 8/10. It makes you think, but ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Many good writers seem to get ignored

    *sigh* Ok, people. dregy, I understand your concern, and I thank you for sticking up for those who don't have as many reviews. Having said that, this site actually has ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Two Out of Three

    Ahhh. Beautemous. I, for one, love the way you conveyed the dialogue. It was confusing, but it worked. Also confusing when you switched to a more lyrical style, but I ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Would you rather....

    Tightrope. You didn't say how far off the ground it had to be. :mrgreen: Would you rather receive millions of reviews, all filled with hate and things that made you ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Rate the movie above you.

    10/10. I'm a geek. Tangled.

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: The Tavern

    Heedless of the impending story, a coal-black dog bursts into the room, its lithe body moving in effortless leaps and bounds. He was closely followed by a flustered girl, who ...

    Apr 18, 2011


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— Phyllis A. Whitney, Guide to Fiction Writing