fireheartedkaratepup

I agree with Soulkana, different line spacing might be better. Also, the flow doesn't seem quite right. Have fun playing with words and stuff--it's important to get your feelings on ...

xD Why are all these welcome posts from a year or more ago getting brought back up? Because people are getting bored, going through the posts on YWS, and commenting ...

Good story. Some problems, but they've already been pointed out, so I don't have much to say. :P (This is just like my speech class. XD) Aaannnddd I'm here for ...

Granted, but THERE'S NOTHING TO PULL IT, since YOU KILLED IT. WHY. I wish for Lembas bread.

...............oh my god. Um, I'll come back and review (if I remember) when the shock wears off.

Hmmmmm............ 8/10. Cute, but doesn't quite have the "aww" factor for me. Y'know, all this will make absolutely no sense once people change their avatars.

Well, whatever I did, I'm sorry. Because you choose to be. Why don't we have holoboards by now?

Huh? Oh, Jash knows. I should check that vidoe out again, now that I'm a bit more familiar with the people in it.

JASHYJASHYJASHYJASH *ahem* I'd subscribed to...someone. I don't really remember why. And they did their own version of Jash's song. I didn't really like their version, but I decided on a ...

.....because she likes you, so she want to know about everything you do. Why do I stay up so late, and force myself to exhaustion?

BAHAHAHAHA, I LOVE IT. Do you mind if I share this? I'll give you full credit, of course.

Granted. I'm extremely smart, and I decide to spurn the company, making my own way as a very successful writer. Pundit is my secretary. (Muahahaha) I wish for a pony.

HAHAHA. The last response was icing on the cake. I'd respace part of the first one: The guppy swims 'round And 'round and 'round in circles. Ripples the water. Or ...

Banned for secretly being a werewolf. (I couldn't think of anything else.)

Granted, only now you're terrified to go to sleep. I wish there were such a thing as heart salve.