fireheartedkaratepup

This is wonderful. I LOVE how you(?) think of your baby as a person--so many young mothers are forgetting this. I love the emotion, and the way you describe things. ...

Ok, now that you've rewritten it I'll go back to my usual reviewing style. I didn’t know , but right now I had to work or I wouldn't survive much ...

Granted--they turn around and eat YOU instead. I wish review day would come faster.

I thought you were a totally different person who has Princess Peach as her avvie, and I was like, "She's not new...." :P The people here are awesome. You may ...

YESSSSS I was confused, though--I don't remember clicking "join" before I was added to a group, and when I clicked the link to take me to my group, it led ...

I'm getting excited.

From our depths to our lips? Huh? I mean, i get it, but...not really..... And chisled isn't a a word. :P Chiseled is. Overall, great poem. Which is why you're ...

You has comma trouble. :P I don't normally like it when people do this, but since it's for school I'll just quote the whole thing here and put my corrections ...

O.o NO STAY AWAY D: I joke. I like you, I just don't like horror. And yes, there probably is some sort of forum for that--you'll be able find plenty ...

Alsho, TEH PUPPEH IS SO CUTE I CAN'T STAND IT Tastes like diabetes is so sweet, it hurts........ I'm not using YWS lingo anymore, am I? I think I've been ...

Can walruses type?

Granted, but there's mold in it. I wish this semester were over already.

......DON'T CHANGE ANYTHING! XD Seriously, you can take the suggestions before me, but I think the poem's fine without them. You made something very scary very humorous. Sorry bout the ...

Forgive this generalization of your age group as a whole, but you’re now a sulky and scowling acne-ridden soul. Hmm, the rhythm seems a bit off on the second-to-last line. ...

.......this was strange. (Strange isn't necessarily bad.) What I mean by that is, at first (except for the line spacing and the emotional nature) it doesn't really feel like a ...