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Re: Rejection
This was originally one big lump. I've tried to divide it into stanzas, but as you can see, I got a little stuck on the middle section. Also, lots of ...
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Re: Resentment
Resentment Festers in the heart like An open wound Tearing apart Everything You once knew And loved And cared about. All I know is This is not The way it ...
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Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for eating my soul. (Seriously, that avvie freaks me out a little.)
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: The User Below You ... [2]
I cannot, but thank for the confidence. Much appreciated. The user below me lives on a farm.
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: The User Below You ... [2]
I have, actually. Two were blocking the road on our safari trip. They had to call the park ranger to drive towards them to get them to move. When they ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: The May Day Review Day Spectacular
TEAM LILYMOORE WILL WIN. ...hopefully.
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Nate. I am so sorry. I was clicking on the photo tab, because I thought it was the same thing as my avatar. I'm sorry. So very, very sorry. i ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
....I hate to complain. I really, really do. But. I CANNOT CHANGE MY AVATAR. And I don't see the gallery button Azila told me about. And I don't want to ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: An Ode to Tigersprite
Skins, I love you. That is all.
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Withering Beauty
Gah. Beautemous. ........I normally like reviewing pieces with fewer reviews because they need it more, but......... Bleh. This is just that good. .......I wish I had nitpicks. :P Also........... I ...
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Re: Jump
Haha, I love it--how you set it up as a suicide, then do almost a 180 and reveal that he's actually attached to a bungee cord. XD The flow seemed ...
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Re: Raison de L'insomnie
Edit: changed some things. No idea why I went with a French title--I thought of "Raison d'etre" or however you spell it, and...voila? Another old one--inspired by my own life ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Senseless
So.... I wrote this a while ago. It was a dark time. ~~~ Bodies lying on the floor The outcome of a senseless war I can't take this any more ...
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Re: Report A Site Bug
I like lots of spaces And for some reason, YWS randomly decides, "I don't like you you writing like that in the comments" and changes it to I likelots ofspaces ...
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Re: The Plague
I coughed, the smoke of the burning fires irritating my throat , t he embers flying in the slight breeze as my village burned to the ground. My fingers grasped ...
Apr 29, 2011
