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Re: Hello every one
HELLLLLL-LOOOOOOOOO ULTRAVIOLET!!! Is it okay if I call you vi? (I love giving people nicknames. It's my hobby. :3) Welcome to YWS!! I'm sure you'll love it here. The people ...
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Re: Hey everybody
HELLLLLL-LOOOOOOOOO ROCKSTAR! (writersrock-->rock-->rockstar.) Welcome to YWS!! I'm sure you'll love it here. You can be bubbly!! ^-^ I tend to talk too much sometimes, and I'm not as worried about ...
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Re: Hi
Hahaha, what is the unending blog, anyway?
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Hello, privet!
HELLL--LLOOOOOOOOO PRIVET! ....what? that's incorrect grammar? (I don't know Russian, so I don't know.) Well, that's what I'm going to associate you with from now on. You're privet. Hope ya ...
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Re: I can never finish anything!
Eh. For me, I let my brain jump around from story to story. Sometimes you need to make yourself sit down and write, but that usually doesn't produce work that's ...
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Re: How'd you discover YWS?
Jash! I was following.... Summerfield? for some reason on youtube, and they did a cover of her song, If I were a DC Writer . (Now on iTunes!! Check it!!) ...
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Re: Sleepless Night
......I was depressed in highschool, ok? And 'm posting the stuff I've written so I can (hopefully) improve on it. -------- I'm in this place again Can't escape What is ...
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Re: Pain
The wording is awkward, the line spacing is..... it needs work, and I'm having trouble fixing it. Fire away. ------- How can you not see the pain? For me, it's ...
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Re: Lemons
Sooooooooo many fragments........ #.# Haha don't worry, it's something that's very common and easy to fix with commas, hyphens, colons, semicoolons, and the like. (But don't overextend-- then you'll e
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Re: Maelstrom
"I don't even" made me :lol:. XD The impossibility of a horizon is a bleeding nightmare, a tornado gasping between pillars of fire, fluctuating, ripping at charred roots like sinews ...
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Re: Wonders
Hm. Overall, this was nice. Short, sweet, simple. However, I can't help but think that there's so much more to this than you've written here. For instance, I like the ...
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Re: Age of Magic [Edited - Draft Two]
............you do know that the deadline for the contest is June 1st, right? (I'm in it too.) I remember quite well how humans from across the galaxies shuttled down in ...
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Re: Rock Talk
...........I'm not sure how to review this. Are you turning this in, or are you simply performing it in front of the class? (And by "turning this in" I mean, ...
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Re: Why? All For You.
O.o People really don't like cliches on this site......... (I don't have a problem with them, usually. Unless they're really overdone. Sorry I didn't review earlier! I didn't have time ...
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Re: My Guardian Dog 3 - Rewritten!
I had my doubts at first (I clicked on this for the "Guard Dog" but wasn't sure what to expect) but.......... I LOVE THIS. I think I'll go read the ...
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