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At first, I started laughing. Then I realized what you were the article was doing and went, Oh..... I think I'm with jasminebells on this one.

..................................................................... No comment on the content. I hate what I hear What is voiced and what is heard. Maybe some punctuation here-- perhaps a comma, per

Eh, these could be separated. I wanted to post them together, for some reason. They're kind of companion pieces. Inspiration strikes! I can't talk, I can't listen, I must write, ...

I HA!'d out loud when I saw this: ywsscreencap.png It's like the one Lavs has up there.

.....you only need 6 likes and 3 comments to be featured? O.o But yeah, this was excellent. I especially liked...... all of it. :P Is there a vital thing I’ve ...

Nooo! I liked the intro you had before. :( Watch your punctuation. You sometimes leave out commas where they should be, or put too many in-- that's really a job ...

Haha, I was gonna comment on the line structure 'til you commented on it in-poem. :P I especially loved the way you talked like Yoda on the line about not ...

How am I supposed to write a 1,000 character review for this? XD ......guess I'll have to get creative, then. :P (I can do that.) All of this is so ...

Sweeeeeeeeeeeet. And yeah, I can definitely tell that you're better with flowers than you are at drawing people. (As most people are. :P) The eyes on the little girl are ...

My prompt: Genre: Realistic Element: your story must be written in the future tense So, naturally, I started writing things in the past tense. XD Then I started over and ...

OMG THIS IS SO TERRIBLE HOW COULD U RITE THIS LIKE SRSLY COME ON IT'S NOT EVEN GOOD Sorry, but I've always wanted to write a flame, and I dearly ...

Banned for too much jumping.

OI. THEY AIN'T JERKS. THEY'RE AWESOME. SRSLY. Yes, they do deserve their own topic.

Hai. Sorry I'm late. My brain burned out, and I prefer poetry. :P Anulekha gazed at the near ended chess game. With quivering fingers she traced the grooves of the ...

Yullo. His chest inhales in He lets out a sigh When you inhale, your chest puffs out. That makes the imagery here something of a quandary. Maybe you could change ...