fireheartedkaratepup

Ok, first of all, you're really good. It's hard to draw people, so congrats. I've only actually taken a few art classes, but let's see what I can tell simply ...

Critiques first---comments later! O.o Every, single, line, ends, in, a, comma, until, you get, to line, *counts* *recounts* *loses track* *counts again* 21. So basically, everything before that is one

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So, I was helping Stori on Writerfeedpad, when..... trippy description.png I was just joking around, but they seemed to like it. :3

FINALLY!! I finally read this all the way through. Why did that take so long? It wasn't difficult! At all! *down on self* Also, D:. PEOPLE SHOULD BE REVIEWING THIS. ...

Summoner of Demons, Warmonger and Chaotic Child, Ciel Phantomhive O.o I like Black Butler, but.... it's weird. 6/10. (Sorry.)

Emotional/defensive reaction: SHUT UP. YOU SHUT UP. RIGHT NOW. I DON'T WANT TO CRY. ^ That happened right around the time he started crying because his daddy didn't notice him. ...

*AHEMAHEM* Plz to has response via pm? Or maybe wall. Kthnx. I don't actually like Romeo and Juliet. It's silly, and everyone dies. I don't like things where everyone dies, ...

Oh good grief, I love this. I'm not entirely sure about the rhythm on parts of it, but I'm having a hard time matching it up to the original, since ...

I know there are storyboards where a group of people collaborate, but I'm not sure about the poll thing. Wait for a mod to comment, they should know.

It was a nice surprise to relieved the pm from you with this newest chapter. Yay! ^_^ ...I just noticed something about the subtitle thingy--there should be a comma after ...

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There are indentations, I swear. It's even in story format. Can you tell? No. Let me know about the ending--should I bring it back to when Inspiration visits again, or ...

I love this. I really, really, want to do a long, thorough, constructive review. It's what I'm used to doing, now. I like doing it. I like helping. I like ...