fireheartedkaratepup

Aww, this was so sweet! It has a powerful message. It is kinda preachy, though--remember that storytelling is a journey, not a destination. This can be really, really hard--I'm still ...

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The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

Mustard seems to have something against first person...... o.o ;3 I love this! It's wonderful. I wish I had nitpicks, but I don't--you captured the sort-of desperation of the artist ...

I know, I'm a terrible person. HECKNAW. I'm taking an internship--Monday thru Wednesday, I'm at a house of prayer all day attending classes that are like church, only we hafta ...

Longest poem I've written! :O Prayer rooms are good for cultivating thought. So, this spawned from the song You found me and expanded from there. It's written somewhat in the ...

:O Wooooowww...... It's sooo purty! I can't really tell that it's a daffodil, though. Maybe it's because of the all-black, but the shape just doesn't scream "daffodil" or even "flower" ...

Bottom up! Cheesy, but with a legitimate side he rarely shows. Think Sanji from One Piece , only with more cheese and less flirty. I don't know what his worst ...

Hahaha, this was quite amusing, especially since I'm not a Bruno Mars fan. (Not sure what it is aboutthe dude, exactly, it's just.... I dunno. I don't like him.) I ...

Awww. I really feel for the speaker in this song. You did well with putting a lot of emotion into your writing--and with lampshade as a prompt--! Fantastic job. I'm ...

I like thought processes. I don't like the books I had to read for my worldviews class. This read like one of those. I'm torn. I'll stop using too many ...

YEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS. A PICTURE TO REVIEW. *ahem* I sorta love you right now. (I'd be even more happy if your avvie wasn't still creeping me out. o.o) Anywho! I love this! ...

Whatever Rosey said. I'm cool with that. She gives good reviews and good advice. *nods* Juuuuust kidding. I do agree with her, though. The concept is very interesting, but the ...

Heyo! The former karatepup here to review. First, thank you very much for breaking up your piece. It's great that you've noticed something about the community, and acted accordingly--not everyone ...

First things first--you need to break up your story. As of now, there are no new paragraphs in your story. At all. I can understand that--I used to hate having ...