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It seems somewhat contrived; there's too much focus on rhyming things. Yes, I know this is a poem, but rhyme is actually only secondary. The focus should be on the ...

Psssshhhh, don't worry so much about the punctuation in poems, duuuuudes. #reactiontoearlierreview It is important, but the line breaks convey just as much as punctuation in a poem. /endrant My ...

Great story! I really liked it. I liked peeking into the minds of the people here, the way you showed the conflict. It was a bit confusing, yes--at first I ...

About number 4.... correct me if I'm wrong, but you seem to have copied part of the "50 ways to make a girl smile" list and claimed it as your ...

I got lost a bit at the beginning, too, but the other reviewer whose name I'm not bothering to check simply because I'm lazy was wrong about the poem not ...

I actually like the leaf better. Maybe it's just that I don't "get" certain styles of art, but I can't tell what's going on in the first picture. What am ...

We will, we will, shamrock you! Wiiiiith......CAKE!

AASD;FLKAJDF;KLAJDS;FKJAD;KFJ;AKSDJ;FLKJA;LDJFL;AJSDLFALKSDJFL;AJSDL;FJASDKFJA;LDSJFA;KLDSJA Spazz NOT over, but I'll stop typing it out. :P So I saw you were featured and went Yay! Lumi! And meant to

I didn't understand that one, Flem. I think this next one is one of my favorite things on YWS. Like, ever. Also, I need a Rapunzel or Pasqal avvie, stat.

Yo Scratch! Too bad you're not on my team this time. “Hey Gumbo.,” There should only be one punctuation mark here. I would go with the period, since you're not ...

Hey Fred, how are ya? There's a handy down in the lower right-hand corner--you have to scroll down a lot, but it tells you where everything is. If you have ...

Your smile's so sweet Making this day feel complete This is good, but try not to fall into the trap of choosing words simply because they rhyme. I bring this ...

Yo. I'm tired. Yay. *cough* Anyway. You should not--and I want to emphasize this--put the setting in italics the way you have done. Either use one (or more, whatever) sentence(s) ...

Ok, I hate you. This is way too long. This is rather awesome. I will tell you right now that I am not familiar with this character, and I do ...

So I thought I was the second reviewer. XP My bad. Overall, this is good. I like how you used the same phrase with different wording; it makes the reader/listener ...