fireheartedkaratepup

Jabba's new nickname? JABCAP.

Hey Kaysha! I'm just going to greet you the way I'd greet any other member. Welcome to YWS! The layout can be confusing at first, but you'll get used to ...

This poem reminds me of Pat Benetar's Love is a Battlefield, especially the first stanza where it describes the reactions of the mom and the dad. Then again, this dad ...

Yo! Flamingsaucybunnypup, here to review. ^_^ The halls boomed loud strikes of silence, with just the sound of the wind pushing against the rustling branches of the tree that stood ...

YO! The flaming bunny pup, here to review. :P Where open eyes Meet closed, Indistinguishable. I don't really understand this part. How can eyes meet if one set is open ...

On the title: I think there should be a comma after "Popularity". I actually agree with Stela's opinion about the "Soooo". I'm all for creative license, and I frequently draw ...

For some reason, I assumed this person was a teacher, at first. Then, as I read it again and again, I realized that maybe it was a student. Right now, ...

.........why is this a piece? I don't understand. I mean, I know you want feedback, but this is just your signature, right? Are you trying to do a style of ...

I love this! I know full well how it is to have a song stuck in your head that annoys you, and I love how you responded to that frustration! ...

Nitpicks first: The short story , “Harrison Bergeron , ” by Kurt Vonnegut , exemplifies what strong beliefs can make humans do and where this, in turn, can lead society ...

Bluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh. This needs work. ------------ Can you love me The way I want to be loved? Can you touch me The way I want to be touched? Can you move ...

First! I like using slang--in songs, I write the way I speak. Second! I know there are cliches here. Ok? Ok. ------------ My body's movin' To the rhythm of my ...

Rosey, as I felt the need to so enthusiastically inform you via pm, I CANNOT HANDLE THAT LEVEL OF CUTE. WHY *cough* Why must you torture the dogless person?! (I ...

I would love one. I only have a debit card. Haikus are hard to do, but I will do one for you. This is the truth. ^ Laaaaaamest haiku evarrrrr, ...

You. Sing this. Post the video on youtube. Share it with YWS. IMMEDIATELY. That is all.