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I find this intriguing. Is it about a child's doll? Is the main character regarded as a baby doll by his/her parents/friends/others? What makes them/it so perfect? The title alone ...

8/10. It's intriguing and catches the reader's attention. Why are they on a subway? Who's going into battle? What are they fighting for? You set up questions in the reader's ...

Thank you for your input, Rosey! I admit, this idea is far from finished and it most likely won't grow anymore than this. I've been going over some older works ...

I've been brainstorming a new story idea, but would appreciate some feedback and pointers. It's important to note that this stemmed from the idea of Orville Simpson's Victory City , ...

My cat ate the last brownie.

"A book? No, no, no. No one is in control of my life! I walk my own path, create my own destiny. I am in control..." -Zefira "I hate to ...

"Please! My whole life has been nothing but..." -Zefira "The dark was definitely scary when I was younger, but I'm not afraid of it now...WHAT?! I'm not!" -Eona "What kind ...

"School? Don't be absurd! Everything I need to know about the world, I've learned on my own. I don't need some pompous know-it-all twit teaching me about meaningless things!" -Zefira ...

"Well, I never really considered them my friends in the first place. They were thorns in my side, for all the good they did! Besides, friends only slow you down. ...

You know you're a writer when... --you pass up socializing with your friends/family/significant other for the sake of writing. --you carry a notebook and pen wherever you go in case ...

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