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Hey Sunny, My name's Firefly, and welcome to YWS! Before I answer your questions, let me link you to some helpful forums: -Go here for the YWS FAQ page. -Snoink's ...

Hey Dragongirl, Would you mind reviewing my work ( Paragon, Chp 1 )? I'm interested in any character behavior/plot inconsistencies, over/under-elaborating, some nit-picks, etc. Thanks!

After a year on hiatus, I am back in action! Here is the first chapter to my novel, Paragon. After neglecting my work for over a year, I feel that ...

Hey there, Seshat, Firefly in for a review! Alright, well for starters my first thought when reading your post was: "Whoa," and it wasn't a good whoa! Your chapter is ...

Hey, Vas. Firefly here for a review! I've never reviewed a script before, and wouldn't know the first thing about fixing one. But I'll go with what I can! I ...

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Hello Kayla, and welcome to YWS! We're a fun-loving community, and our members will be more than happy to read your poems and give constructive (and often detailed) feedback for ...

Hmm. The others have asked some great questions, so I'll answers theirs as well! --Favorite color: blue! ;) --Favorite book: right now it's Wolfbreed by S.A. Swann --Favorite movie: A ...

Hey there, Mossyra. Firefly here for a review! Usually I review while reading through, so my overall impressions will be made towards the end of this post. (Blue words) represent ...

I was weird. I think, as seriously devoted writers, we're all a bit weird. :P

Hey Emilie, Firefly here for that review! Re-Edited with Paragraphs Paragraphs are lovely! :P Well, since I usually review while reading I'll just jump right into it! At the end, ...

Hello Mossyra. Welcome to YWS! I've been writing for a few years, myself, and I always find my work improving! My style developed from reading books and studying how those ...

I don't remember when I wrote this, but my first attempt at writing a story was a fan-fiction. About the [original] Power Rangers. Because I didn't like how this one ...

"Please! My whole life has been nothing but..." -Zefira "The dark was definitely scary when I was younger, but I'm not afraid of it now...WHAT?! I'm not!" -Eona "What kind ...

"School? Don't be absurd! Everything I need to know about the world, I've learned on my own. I don't need some pompous know-it-all twit teaching me about meaningless things!" -Zefira ...