fire_of_dawn

I don't know whether I envy you or not. I've wanted to see England for years, to visit the country great authors come from. For the moment, I'm stuck in ...

This question is crucial to my story. I read that cats can't naturally create a specific amino acid, which is why they must eat meat. Are there any other sources ...

On the way upstairs, she kept mouthing the word "rooms". Curious, Alex turned to face her. "Ma'am?" "Mia, please. I'm not quite used to all this formality." Large and earnest, ...

Welcome to YWS. We're all mad here. (Not.) You'll most likely find us accommodating, bashful... hey, be quiet, Mr. Snicket! In any case, don't be afraid to ask for help ...

“A- tail?” faltered Aral Alexander. He chewed on the thought for a moment, then asked his father, “What other tricks does this girl have?” Miles Vorkosigan smiled. “Not tricks, Alex. ...

I attended a K-12 school, so I guess my point of view will be helpful. Believe it or not, my school is smaller than most high schools. There are, at ...

Sol, this is marvelous. There are only a few errors. destruction?, Generally a comma and an end-mark is unnecessary. "But not helpless, neither alone," I think it's "nor alone" in ...

Maybe one thing you should avoid: a villain who, deep down, is merely a bully. This person will cower when the hero looks his way, but always prey on the ...

Does a whole series count? If so, I have three words: The Seafort Saga. The entire series is about the misadventures of a disturbed teenager who, in the end, poisons ...

Anxious villagers packed the field, murmuring, “It’s a dragon!” All but Titus- he eyed the field’s dimensions, wondering if there’d be room to accommodate a dragon. Easily four and a ...

Most of the time, 'gifts' in storybooks turn out to be magical or psychic powers. What I'm proposing is a focus on God-given strengths, like art, athletic ability and so ...

Is there a difference between 'following' someone and being their friend?

I'm just letting of steam, maybe... but next year, could you send an advance notice? I would like to be able to write/edit something and send it in...

Around 3:10 Eastern time Firefox- whichever version came with Windows XP. Page: Christian Writers At the top of the browser window, the name of a discussion page I wasn't viewing ...

Well, it's a good-to-be-alive day. I see you've started reviewing already.