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Have to gently disagree with ya, Eddie. I'm a Christian and not afraid to confront reality; in fact, my faith helps me to deal with it. The difference is, religion ...

How does this change when applied to short stories?

This is more of a casual question than anything. It came to mind when I was writing a new "Hundred Suns" story. Assuming it doesn't need to be aerodynamic, what's ...

I'm posting this because I really agree with the chorus. Enjoy If Everyone Cared

Here you go, I hope you like fantasy. Here's Neyri. If you'd be so kind, could you help me fix the idea of "talking kangaroo" in readers' minds?

"Where's your uniform?" The hated phrase brought Spirit to wakefulness. She eyed the impertinent trooper, long and hard. When he didn't flinch, she snarled in his face. "This one paid ...

Good job, Saga.

Hi there, you chaps and chapesses. If there's anyone who enjoys Brian Jacques' books, Mossflower Country would like to extend an invitation. The page can be found right here .

This was well written, Create. There was one thing I noticed, though: the announcer frantically attempted to make sense of the chaos occurring. You've broken with the progressive tense (attempted) ...

I had held many hard men on my wooden arms. By now I'd lost track of their sins and crimes. This Man, though, was different. Even as the soldiers placed ...

"Is the Emperor... dead?" His human friend stared sorrowfully at both man and dragon. "What a waste... and all the tumult over his successor..." "We should go," said Zaair softly. ...

Very good piece; there were only a couple of mistakes as far as grammar goes. after the releasing of my AS level results Now, this isn't a grammatical error. I'd ...

Starr I couldn't hide forever- especially if I wanted that spot in the Patrol! The first hare I ran into was Ghost. She steadied me, then remarked, "You could stand ...

Welcome to YWS. We never bite unless asked to. Someone should inform you about points. For every review in the literary forums that's over 250 characters, you'll earn points. It ...

Since everything else seems to be covered, I'll say this. It seems odd to use words like "moderate" in the narration, yet have her call Iarran "a guy". Second thing ...