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Thanks, guys! I'm going to be telling this to everyone: Stori's account doesn't work, so I'm positing this under the Fire's. I like the idea about animals reflecting their "types," ...

Thanks, all of you. To avoid mix-ups, I'm going to keep posting this under the same account.

Etherite, n. A frozen, jewel-like form of the element "ether," which allows safe passage through warp space. The gem form is believed to have a healing power. Galxis' Dictionary, Revision ...

He, I mean I, was just trying to put something down.

She saw me, With a face like my own. A heart I could tell, Had its eyes set on home. We took time together, Walked home from school every day. ...

Would you like to learn? I know a few things.

'101 Ways to Bug your Parents.'

Banned because I don't know what a star is, what it's for, or how to get it. -ClimberSquirrel P.S Banned for having two stars

Name: (ClimberSquirrel on here) Sarah Age: 11, almost 12 Fav book && YES ONE: I honestly don't know. *Sheepish smile* Fav author:Same as above Fav food: ... You expect me ...

Thank you all. Rosey-- I grew up with cats as well. Rubric-- they're pack hunters, but being more civilized, they live in tribes. :twisted:

Name: Ba'shen Race: Dragonne (like a cross between a lion and a dragon.) Class: N/A. Age: around 2 years, but mature for her race. Appearance: built mostly like a lion, ...

That was very good. You showed the characters well. The only problem is that you could use more description.

Here's some advice I picked up. Place a few underscores __ like this and set them to white.

I shall tattle on Black Cat Sachiko. For being a good person, and an honest reviewer.

If you're serious about your faith and want to praise God through your writing, CrossWorld needs you. As of yet, the field is open. Send me a message if you're ...