fire_of_dawn

"Adam. Adam, get up." I grumbled something and turned over. "Adam, today's our birthday. Don't you remember?" My twin brother's voice promised a good breakfast, maybe an illicit movie, and ...

Avari looked around, slowly. His hands gripped the rail, showing the fiery tattoos that so intimidated younger students. It was all part of the act, of course. The seventh bell ...

That was tae kwon do, not karate. I missed this one, but I'm in Climber's class. Good job, Sister.

I would venture to guess that this is a very good piece of writing.

Do you ever do requests? 'Cause I'm putting one in, Snoink.

Bravo. I even decided to get coffee a second chance after reading this.

My only complaint is that you misuse commas in this piece. It seems like you forget how to use any other punctuation sometimes. My jaw dropped, "What?" I stammered. This ...

Since the original "Dark Star" thread is rather unruly, I'm going to start again here. Any old members, please send me a message! New people, here are the rules. 1. ...

This sounds like an idea for a storybook; in fact, I think there is a "boarding school" storybook in progress.

In "The Hobbit," the name of Bilbo's journal is "There and Back Again." Then later, Frodo and company sometimes call it "the red book." I'm asking if they sell journals ...

Specifically, I'm looking for events that happened along the border with England. Also, a few towns' names on both sides would help.

All right, you rascally cats! Maybe you thought since Stori was out, you'd... I'm kidding. Just send me a message if you want to keep posting.

I'm too late to second that, so I'll just give you a gold star.

Yes, it is my name. It means “Year” in the speech of long ages; others might have it, or Anna, or Ala. I seem to be the only one with ...

I think this was very good. I love the sense of loneliness throughout the piece. The streets of the town were lonely, save for the dust that the breeze stirred ...