fire_of_dawn

Jesse: "Hello, daughter." We both laughed; these formal titles weren't my style or hers. I was always Jesse, and she was always Cika. "I think the meeting's started. We should ...

People are writing poetry about my sister? I was not informed of this! Just kidding. A very well-written poem.

Yes, even I have been infected by the haiku bug. Here goes. Give me a minute And I'll change your life, just watch. Two, and we'll see. Right?

A very sound piece of work. I don't really have anything to say... Except that "it's" means it is. "Its" means "belonging to it."

*sighs* Cute it may be, but the ending falls a little flat. Marianna, her co-worker had kept pestering her to go out on dates more often. This would read better ...

(All right, I shall post as Jesse this time.) Jesse: Where is that scatterbrained youngster? Distractedly, I scratched my ear. Cika was becoming harder and harder to find. Once again, ...

It's nice to eat... I mean meet you, Cold. What do you like to write?

A Christian who's not afraid to have secular interests! I'm delighted. So, do you like "Dragons in Our Midst" by Bryan Davis?

Fiery strode into the room. He saw his alter ego partner in crime friend Stori and sat down by him. "Oh my gosh, Nutty!" someone yelled. They both covered their ...

Haven't suffered it myself, but I word of advice. Stories about people who're injured and lose their memory are as common as leaves. Make sure, if your character suffers memory ...

Fewer characters, Jen. That's the secret. In "Warriors" for example, there is one main character: Fireheart. But the author tries to juggle four clans, each with over twenty members, and ...

Am I allowed to use some of these?

Lovely, Jen. I like the sixth one in your last post. Looks like a Celtic device.

*sighs* Please, please repost this in parts. I can't read anything like this without turning pages, sorry.

I love the Redwall books, I must say. Yes, there are stereotypes (such as genteel or gluttonous hares), but take a look at Martha in "Loamhedge."