fire_of_dawn

The creature sat back on its long legs, watching him. Jamie could just see a muscular tail propping it up. An absurd thought struck him. ‘It looks like someone in ...

I don't know yet.

That's very true... and chilling. I don't have much to say except "good job."

This isn't bad, Hobbit. (I can call you Hobbit, right?) The rhyme scheme is effective and you deal with an important subject. If ever you need something reviewed, don't hesitate.

"Kitty, when'd you first know? About your being..." "Hm. We should have a name for ourselves. I was two and a half." "Five." "OK. You know, you really are beautiful, ...

Well done. I've lost friends before, everyone has.

This looks like fun. Can I have a spot for a ten-year-old boy?

I very much enjoyed this poem. The use of Spanish is well-done.

You've had a hard life, I can tell. Perhaps you should encourage others to share their life stories.

And yes, there is a Bible verse concerning this. It says, "Do not let the sun go down on your anger."

All right, my good fellow, you needn't fear. :| In the first paragraph, you make it seem as if the main character's mother is the 'voice' he's hearing. A good ...

Teo, from Alissa's Mark I'm only a tomcat. How am I supposed to know about technology? (mispronounces it horribly) Yes, I'm relying on Dawn to type this down. My paws ...

This happened to me too. It was an accident. I didn't have recall of at least a few seconds.

It looks like a good place to be. Thanks.

Who's the Owl?