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This is good- the hair and shading is well done. I always fail at drawing profiles, so kudos to that XD I would say that you could improve on the ...

It's a nice drawing. I really like the firey blue-green thing surrounding him. The character's design itself is pretty cool, I like the arm gauntlet things and red tat ^^ ...

I did this at my figure drawing class. It took around 20 minutes, more or less. (Then again I tend to space out and just stare at it for half ...

First off, this is real . You really let us into your life, and I can really visualize this happening- everyone has arguments with their moms, and I know I've ...

I like it :D The shading is pretty, and the design is pretty cool. The only thing is that the legs look kind of awkward. Think about how bones move ...

Dear diary, Today is a day like no other. Today, fish don’t swim. Today, birds don’t fly. And today, hearts don’t beat. Today, fish plunge into the pristine depths of ...

A memoir I wrote for my english class. --- I could see the see the Wild from the house. It stood there, looming, breathing, listening. It was always alive. It ...

I loved the feeling to this but some parts just didn't flow too well. If you changed around some of the lines, it would work better. I can't imagine it ...

You have a beautiful writing style. It's descriptive and poetic, it made me want to read it. Well done.

This is my first review. I hope I don't mess it up too badly XD Just then the bell rang. We gathered our books and raced out of the classroom. ...

The first thing I thought was Shirley, but Elizabeth works too. My character is 17 or 18, a senior in high school. He's athletic, he plays on varsity football. People ...

I love the bright color of the cherry- it makes you look at it. The angle is great, but I don't like the background of the cup behind the cherry ...

Hi everyone, I just joined :D I love to write and always have a plot in my head but have serious issues with finishing things. Hopefully I'll eventually actually finish ...