filmcanister

yes. i think verses would be wonderful.

do we have any other glbtq persons here? (gay, lesbian, bisexual, transgender, questioning) because i am a lesbain. yup. where are you guys located? what's it like there? are you ...

well, where does one draw the line between romantic love and a desperate sexual attraction? that's what i would have answered. romantic love is all about sex. you can have ...

i enjoyed it. perhaps you could elaborate on the different elements a bit more. y'know, earth, fire, water, and air, the latter of which didnt get any mention at all. ...

It’s been. One of those. Weeks. But more than those, usually, they’re not this bad – though, as Kendra, my best friend, told me, It Could Have Been Worse. Most ...

My arms are colder than that time you touched me with your this is awkwardly broken up because what i think at first is that your arms are colder than ...

You sprang from storybooks, accompanied by the planar shadows of imagination. But I lost you like a spider somewhere along the way to a third dimension, a verification that others ...

Little girl, did you not hear? I need you close, I want you near! honestly. all i can think of with those two lines is child molestation. With worry I’m ...

There you are, in your red shirt, under the fire-berry sun of summers gone. The pixeled silence of photography mocks the moments we spent over water chestnuts, the laughter of ...

your opening made me think of a beating heart. this idea should be carried on throughout the rest of the piece, because it can work in so many ways. generally, ...

i honestly can't figure out why you opened with "yay." it's distracting. what would be funny is if you capitalized Whole, and left half un-capped. if you came third, you'd ...

Deep underground prospects at the river-crook of my arm, where we buried charcoal with our melted-together clay-pot palms in the hopes of diamond blood-bond love-root veins to come. Your live ...

one of the things that first struck me with this was the notion that you capitalized all of the first line words' beginning letters. classy. the line "and your fingers ...

good meter most of the time. first stanza is slightly irregular; perhaps drop two in the second line or add some to the first, and keep the beat through the ...