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Welcome to YWS Mackenzie. I like your poem. Goosebumps form on the arms and necks of the players They feel incredible, Fearless, And happy This is my favorite part of ...

I am sorry your horse coliced and died.I have horses myself so I know how hard losing one can be on a person. The poem sounds more like a column ...

This poem is very depressing.I have one suggestion. it whispers quietly in my ear, "It will be OK", it says, I think you should take out the "It says" because ...

I love your poem. There is no major changes you need to make. the soles of my twelve-dollar ‘poor people worker shoes’ from Wal-Mart, so affectionately deemed by my mother. ...

Thanks for all the reviews.I tryed to take some of your advice. These are some pictures of my cat Merlin.

I love your photos. They are much better than mine.The place in Kentucky where you live looks really beautiful. My favorite photos are the clump of flowers on a tree ...

I kind of liked this poem even though some parts of it don't make sense to me. The sun has past left slammed the door wide This is confusing. What ...

This is my attempted photography of the woods near the back of the farm where I live. This is the woods. This is the stream. This was an interesting tree. ...

I love this abstract design. I think you should frame it. I think that for some of the drawing that should use a different medium and play with the values ...

Why do people end up in a wheelchair? Your first thought may be paralysis. yes, this is true. But a large range of conditions may result in mobility assistance, some ...

I think your poems are okay. I am going to review the first untilted poem. Untitled My body has become a breathing septic tank. I think you could have done ...

That is interesting. I have never heard of this organization before. Your essay is certainly informative. Good luck and keep writing fiction.

I think your poem is okay. I would like to point out some obvious errors watch people as I read and I see they're half aswleep, I think you mean ...

I like it. Maybe that's because I can relate to what you are saying in the poem. What exactly did you get marked as a failure for? and who is ...

I like this poem about "Alice in Wonderland." I come tumbling down, falling into a world of upside down, where everyone is mad, and flowers talk and a sing. It's ...