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Re: What Happens In The End?
You have a great poem, it is simple short and sweet. There is one thing that I would change in your poem. When you say "go to heaven on high", ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Fatuous
Hi good poem. you poem creates a vivid image. It is way better than mine. I think you are missing some punctuation. The poem also has nice rhythm. keep up ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Crazed
I am thrilled you like it.
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: My Haiku
Wow... spasmodic, Random...Why refrigerator?
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Crazed
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Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Break My Heart A Little More
Good poem! I like it's message.. I can't really say anything bad about it. keep writing
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Psychology
I thought your poem was good.You might want to fix some of the grammar like coz and aint. I also have a question what does "your diamonds" mean ? keep ...
Feb 1, 2010