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This is a fantastic poem. I think your discriptions are clear and they paint a vivid picture. I love your title. Have a good day fiction

I liked your poem and I thought it had good rythym. I do have one suggestion thought Will it always be thus way? I think you should change this line ...

Phenology phenology is the study of nature. tell me what you think. Today is a beautiful day. The suns golden rays are kissing the earth making the heavy blanket of ...

I think your poems a little short. I have a number of suggestions for you. First... The hope that is put In somebody that regrets I think this should be ...

From a writers stand point I think it sounds a little cliche. If I was you friend getting this on valentines day I would be overjoyed. It has nice rhythm ...

Your poem was interesting. Freindship and precious love flys the bright streets Its Friendship I like your word choice for this poem and the poem flows well. Once you correct ...

This is my first time reviewing lyrics. Your lyrics remind me of Switchfoot's song "Only Hope". I would change Every time our eyes meet I tend to forget to breathe ...

This is a unique piece to be on the romantic fiction. I haven't had any kind of experience with this type of writing but I will try to review it ...

I liked this chapter better than the last one.I your descriptions of Damien. I do have one suggestion though there is a part in the story where you say "there ...

Your work is good as usual. I do have some suggestions please name the class Fate is in when they are doing work in the lab. I think you should ...

wow! Your poem portrays some strong emotions. I like your similes.I think you might want to change the last line of your poem because I think collapse into your self ...

You have a interesting poem.I like the simile at the end. I also think you are missing a couple of commas.I think you did a nice job describing the dream. ...

That is a great idea. what mythical human like creature would you pick? I would have to say I would pick a fairy. Maybe I would base the story in ...

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