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Hideous nights weather the soul One day under the surface of a stoic face emotions writhe, tortured by the burning pain and longing they scream for a second life Perceptive ...

Wow! This is awesome. It is the type of poetry that you would expect to find in a book. I love your use of figurative language.I envy you right now. ...

I think that you did a good job of describing the girl in blue and her emotions.You portray the humans in the story as self absorbed ,idiots and the aliens ...

Hey Kingolions, I like your book thus far. I agree with the other reviewers that you need to do a better job seperating the dialouge because some of the dialouge ...

Hey Kingolions, It's Fiction here to do a review. I liked your story. It was well written and carries the plot well throughout the first chapter. I noticed a couple ...

I thought this story was interesting. Your main charcter seems like a nonconformist which reminds me of the book Stargirl. Throught the intire piece I was a little bit confused ...

I thought that your speech was okay. I feel like it is lacking rational organization and at some points it is a hodgepodge of subjects stuck together at random.This is ...

I love this poem. My inner child, Have you seen her? I'm afraid she won't come back again. She looks like me but smaller and Her hair is tangled wild. ...

Why do you stare at me with hatred and fear? I am the same person you have known for all these years. Doubting His presence and His plan I know ...

Hello New hero, It's fiction here to do a review. To be honest it made me confused.I think it might have somthing to do with the title. Do I still ...

I thought the story was interesting. I wouldn't necessarily put it in non fiction because I feel like half of it is fiction and the other half is non fiction.I ...

Hey thegilliangill, It Fiction here to review. First of all I have never heard of Martyn Waghorn or the team he plays on. Does this guy play soccer? I thought ...

I think that your diary entry is good. I think that you will get an A. I only have a couple of suggestions... Walking alone, in the wreckage of once ...

Hey Virsanity, It's Fiction903 and I am going to review your poem. I thought that you did an okay job but I do have a couple of suggestions. My corrections ...

Accents, love them or loathe them we all have them. Traveling around the country this summer has made me realize what a funny accent I have. I thought it would ...