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Hello, Since this is really large I am going to do the first two sections now, and the rest tomorrow. I think the introduction of your story drones on a ...

Hello, I'm fiction and as part of my new years resolution I have chosen to give free reviews. I am a very busy person but I will try to get ...

Hey I'm Fiction. I would really appreciate if you could review my poem. Thank you so much.

I liked your poem overall, but I thought it would be better with a few less question marks because they get a little bit monotonous. Keep writing. Fiction

think that you poem is also pretty good. I don't really think it needs any improvement and you should not doubt your writing abilities. I like that this poem has ...

Hello, I thought that your poem was intriguing and I liked the suspense. You must forgive me but I feel that I can't comment on your punctuation because I am ...

Hello, I have not been on YWS for about two years and I wanted to come back. I will soon start reviewing. I know that I need help with punctuation, ...

I like this poem. I think that you have a good rhyme scheme and precise word choice. star-crossed, starlit, little stars, This is the only line that I would change ...

I was sopposed to emulate Emily Dickenson for a school assignment. This is my best try. A person dies Three times Once- when madness engulfs the mind Slithering in slowly ...

Welcome to YWS. I am Fiction here to do a review. Your poem was very good. I would try to explain why the mother left her family in the farm. ...

I like your story and I think that you got off to a strong start. At some points throughout the first chapter it seems like you are rambling because you ...

I think that you did an okay job on this poem. At some points it seems sort of childish and I feel this could be remided by using more advanced ...

Welcome to YWS. I think you will like it here.If you have any further questions about the site you can always PM me. Have a great day fiction.

I just read your poem and I think we have two very different versions of hope but that is okay. Have a good day and thank you for reviewing my ...

Overall this is a good poem.I have a couple of things I would like to point out. I can’t see what’s wrong But I am not blind I’ve noticed this ...